Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
Naughty teeth
The man catches a fish and the fish spits the teeth out at the man and the man gives his friend the teeth and the man was so excited he fell into the water and his friend helps his friend out of the water then he gave his teeth back and they went home the end.
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Hi Jaydee, well done with this piece of writing! Ewww imagine swapping teeth with someone! So gross!
ReplyDeletehi there Jaydee, this is a funny way to get your teeth back! Would you want them if someone else had used them? Yuck!!!
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