Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, March 25, 2020
My news article the back flipping amazing giraffes.
Photo's and event took place at Canada's Olympic swimming pool's
Never in my wildest dream's i thought Giraffes could do back-flips and not
just normal back-flips but at a astonishing height and 4 legged frog swimming.They diving like a rocket ship and making no splashes.It's truly amazing to watch.
These giraffes are so well trained and in form with each other it's something I've never seen before.
Do yourselves a favour and book your tickets online now at www.giraffesjumping.com and come see for yourselves.
The giraffes are doing acrobatic back-flips,swimming and lot's of other brilliant stuff to entertain you.
Jumping giraffe catch you at the next event.
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Kia ora Jaydee,
ReplyDeleteYour title caught my eye so I've popped on to see what your blog post is all about. What an interesting picture. I've never seen a giraffe do backflips into a swimming pool. I really loved your simile "they dived like rocket ships". What a great description to use in your writing.
I wonder if what hippos would be good at in the swimming pool?
Thanks for writing the eye catching title and drawing me in.
:) Sharon