The dog on the Beach
One hot sunny day there was a dog on the beach,
I saw a dog that had golden fluffy hair and blue eyes like the ocean .
I could hear waves crashing on the ocean and water splashing on my face.
I saw the dog drooling on the sand, as the blazing sun shone on the golden sand.
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Very interesting Jaydee can't wait to read more, I bet that the dog had lots of fun.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ashlyn and I go to Ahipara school. I love your post it is so great and colourful. Maybe next time you can add more colour or a background. Good work!
ReplyDeleteHI my name Is Ahi and I come from Ahipara school I really liked you background and I liked all the stuff you were talking about your dog so blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Samantha from Ahipara School. I really liked how you added in the place around you, the people in the story and really good description of the place! this was a really awesome little story and it was short but still good. Anyway blog ya later!
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