Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, June 22, 2020
The amazing Rome
Hi my name is Jaydee and in literacy we are learning to write an information report this week we dead Rome.Have you been to Rome??
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi Jaydee this is very interesting.
ReplyDeleteI love your pictures and all the information, remember what mum said try adding some of your own words not just copy and paste! Well done keep up the hard work!
Kia ora Jaydee
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your information report on Rome because I have been there. Seeing the Colosseum was really amazing. Imagine fighting a lion!!! Remember in include your source, ka pai Jaydee
Ms Catton