My Amazing dog

In writing we were writing about a golden retriever on the Beach and underbthis is my  writing. Tell me if I have to  change something and I hope you enjoy it. My question to you, is do you have a dog and has it been on the beach? Tell me in the comments.

The dog on the Beach

One hot sunny day there was a dog on the beach,

I saw a dog that had  golden fluffy hair and blue eyes like the ocean .

 I could hear waves crashing on the ocean and water splashing on my face.

 I saw the dog drooling on the sand, as the blazing sun shone on the golden sand.