This week we have been making a Fractured Fairy Tale in Literacy, this is mine so give me feedback if I need to add more. It is not finished yet I will update it this week. I really enjoyed working on this. Have you heard of a Fractured Fairy Tale?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 21, 2020
2 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Jaydee, Its Honey here your amazing friend :D. Whats going to happen next?! Please tell me :(. Your story is very interesting, I'm guessing a remake of three little pigs? Anyway this reminded me of my story the 3 fleas and the angry monkey :). Yes yes I know weird right? Also next time add more description and maybe make them talk? Ok your story was really good and I hope to hear more. See ya later Jaydee, From Honey
ReplyDeleteHi Jaydee, Its Angelica your best friend, Your story looks amazing
ReplyDeleteWhats going to happen next?
Your story makes me wanna sit on the edge of my seat its really interesting